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| StyleWriter's
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most powerful way to edit any document |
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Call
StyleWriter up by clicking a button in your word processor's
toolbar.
StyleWriter displays all your editing problems at the same
time. As you begin editing, StyleWriter offers intelligent
alternatives and sound advice to help you edit your document
into simple, concise, plain English. With a split screen
of StyleWriter and your word processor, you can go through
your document at your own pace. You can click on any style
or usage problem with your mouse, or click back to your
word processor to edit your text.
StyleWriter
edits any document. Articles, press releases, resumes and
cover letters, technical manuals, speeches, ads, sales letters,
proposals, legal documents, corporate communications - you
name it, StyleWriter can help edit it. Within seconds of
launching, StyleWriter has analyzed your documents for thousands
of style and English usage issues including:
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Complex
words
Overused words
Jargon/Abstract words
Wordy phrases
Passive verbs
Foreign words
Qualifying words
Confused hyphens
Clichés
Legal words
Long Sentences
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Misused
Words
Confused Words
Hyphenation
Sexist Writing
Common Grammar Slips
Miscellaneous
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StyleWriter
Dear
Mr Thompson:
We
have now completed
the majority of
our redrafting work conducted
on an annual basis
for your management brochure
however a number
of issues
still remain
to be addressed
before it can
be sent for printing.
I
have been asked
to follow-up on
a number of questions that need to be
answered by yourself
or your head of public affairs.
I
would be grateful if
you could give this matter your urgent
attention. Should you have any questions
concerning the
information required,
please do not hesitate to contact me.
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StyleWriter
Dear
Mr Thompson:
We
have completed most of this year's redrafting
work on your corporate management brochure.
However, you need to address some issues before
we print the brochure.
I need to follow up these questions with you
or your head of public affairs.
Please
look at these issues urgently and contact me
if you need more information.
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93
StyleWriter
suggested improvements 17:
6 wordy phrases
· 2 complex words
· 3 business clichés
· 5 passive verbs
· 1 long sentence
· 1 grammar error (by yourself)
1 hyphenation error (follow-up)
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60
The
StyleWriter recommended redraft is 60 words
- 33 percent shorter.

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Full-screen
editing plus your word processor
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StyleWriter's
displays all of its editing advice at once. You
can expand the screen to show a page of your document, with
each problem or issue highlighted. The top of the screen
shows you how to edit your document into concise, clear
English. You can make most changes by just clicking the
blue alternative shown. If you want to make more extensive
changes - and you will - just click StyleWriter's Edit button
and you're in your familiar word processor with all its
advanced editing features.

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| Instant
analysis and ratings of every document |
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StyleWriter's
gives you instant, relevant analysis and scores.
Most other writing aids offer you simplistic readability
formulas. These measure, often inaccurately, your sentence
length and a syllable count to define long words. There's
more to good writing than sentence length and word length.
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StyleWriter
has three key scores and ratings shown at the bottom of
the program's screen.
1. The
Style Index - an overall score of the clarity of
your style.
2. The
Average Sentence Length - an important readability
measure.
3. The
Passive Index - a measure of the most common writing
problem.
Each score and rating becomes instantly updated as you edit
your document.
When
you edit with StyleWriter, you'll discover that StyleWriter
shortens sentences and strengthens words. Readers can easily
take in and remember your message and as they find your
writing style easy and understandable.

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| Fine-tuning
the analysis to your document |
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You
can adapt StyleWriter's analysis and ratings to the type
of document you're drafting.
An advertisement needs to have a punchy, direct writing
style; a manual needs to be clear and simple; a report can
carry more complex ideas. So you can tell StyleWriter the
type of document you're drafting and it will alter its analysis
and ratings to reflect the different styles expected. For
example, you'll get a higher Style Index and stricter ratings
if you tell StyleWriter you're writing an advertisement
rather than a report.
Choose
from 12 writing tasks to fine-tune StyleWriter's analysis.

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| See
an instant graph of sentence variety |
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StyleWriter
gives you an instant graph of your sentence variety so you
can see if you're mixing long and short sentences to add
interest to your style. While short sentences
make easy reading, good writing contains good sentence variety
and a readable average sentence length between 15 to 20
words. The program will even pop-up a warning if your sentence
average drops below 12 words - a sign you're taking the
idea of short sentences too far.

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Use
sentence variety to add interest to your writing style.
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| See
a breakdown of your writing problems |
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Identify
your writing habits in every document. The
left-hand side of StyleWriter's Category Summary Screen
shows the style problems in document you're checking. You'll
find this a great way to know if your style is passive and
wordy, abstract or stale.

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Use
StyleWriter's summary of writing issues to identify your
writing habits.
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| Add
advice to StyleWriter |
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You
can add advice to StyleWriter to increase the power and
accuracy of the program. The more you use StyleWriter
the more your writing and editing skills improve. Learning
the main techniques of good editors makes you think like
an editor and you'll soon spot other ways to improve your
writing. For example, suppose you notice you are overusing
the words 'provide', 'involve' and 'undertake',
you simply add them to the program and ask the program to
pop up some relevant advice. It's as easy as using search
and replace on your word processor. But StyleWriter searches
for everything you add and its 35,000 style and usage patterns
check every time you run the program.
Add
any editing advice to StyleWriter

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| Delete
any advice that annoys you |
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Deleting
advice from the program is easy.
Anything that annoys you - perhaps because it has a different
industry-specific meaning - you can easily remove.
Fine-tune
StyleWriter's advice to suit your writing needs.

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| Make
context-sensitive exceptions |
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You
can make context-sensitive changes to StyleWriter's advice
to fine-tune it to your own writing needs. For
example, StyleWriter suggests replacing 'purchasing'
with 'buying' to simplify your style. But what if
your job title is 'Purchasing Manager'?. You can
make 'purchasing manager' an exception. Then every
time StyleWriter checks a document it highlights all occurrences
of 'purchasing' unless the next word is 'manager'.
Fine-tuning
StyleWriter's advice is easy.

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| Review
the changes made to the program |
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StyleWriter
records any changes you make to the program so you can review
and even reverse them. Most users delete or make
exceptions to between 10 and 50 of StyleWriter's 35,000
patterns. StyleWriter's Review Changed Patterns feature
lets you view every change you've made.
Review
your changes to StyleWriter's database.

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| Bring
StyleWriter's power to your documents |
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StyleWriter
looks for patterns in language and uses wild cards to find
thousands of variants of problems in writing. This gives
the program immense searching power. StyleWriter has 35,000
style and English usage checks designed to reflect patterns
in the English language. For example:
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StyleWriter |
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Jones has reached his decision
and will take his retirement
option next year. |
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| Mr
James has decided
to retire next year. |
Editors
recognise 'reached his decision' and 'take retirement'
as hidden verb - expressions you can turn from nouns to
verbs to improve style, add action and save words. Because
StyleWriter uses wild cards within its pattern searches,
it doesn't matter if you write 'reached his decision',
'reaching different decisions' or 'reached my
decision'. StyleWriter finds each variant hidden verb
and thousands of other possible hidden verbs with just a
few coded patterns.
StyleWriter,
by using wild cards to match with patterns editors spot
in text, is the world's most powerful writing aid.
Bring
the power of StyleWriter to your writing.
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| Use
StyleWriter for different writing tasks |
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You
can call up StyleWriter's extensive help screens for different
writing tasks. Perhaps you have to write a sales letter
for the first time. Simply click on StyleWriter's
Writing Tips and you'll find expert advice. You can
also call up this advice from your word processor's help
menu so it's available when you first draft your document.

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StyleWriter
helps you tackle different writing tasks.
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| Use
StyleWriter's help screens for more editing advice |
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If
you want more advice, just click your mouse on the problem
and up pops the relevant help screen with more editing advice.
For
example, if you've used a grammar checker you'll notice
it stops on passive verbs. But you probably don't understand
why using passive verbs are a problem or what to do with
them. StyleWriter, with its accurate and comprehensive search
for passive verbs, explains why passive verbs are such a
problem and shows you simple techniques to switch them to
the shorter, more direct active style.

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Look
at this government example. Changing the passive verbs (shown
in red) into active verbs (shown in blue) saves 18 per cent
of the words.
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It
was estimated by
the research that half of the states would adopt the
approach, and that savings of up to $900 million a year
would be made. However,
to make sure these savings are
guaranteed estimates will need to be
recalculated by the Department of Labor for
accuracy.
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StyleWriter |
The
research estimated half
of the states would adopt
this approach and could save
up to $900 million a year. The Department of Labor will
need to recalculate
this estimate to guarantee
these savings are accurate.
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Switching
passive verbs to active verbs is easy with StyleWriter's
expert editing advice.
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| Keep
track of your improved writing skills |
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StyleWriter's
Statistical Archive lets you record the word count, style
index, average sentence length and passive index of every
document.
StyleWriter records your scores when it first checks the
document (the original draft score) and when you finished
editing (the redraft score). The Statistical Archive lets
you measure the improvement you make to each document. By
looking at the original draft score, you can see how your
general writing standard improves.

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StyleWriter
keeps a record of the writing scores
for every document checked.
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"StyleWriter
is like a crash course in professional editing. It will not
leave one's writing unchanged."
- Computers and the Law |
"Looking
back at the way I used to write press releases I now understand
why
editors didn't bother to publish them. StyleWriter shows me
how to write in the style newspaper and magazine editors prefer.
The result is more free
exposure in the media."
- Chief Executive Officer |
"If
its a style checker you're after we'd plump for StyleWriter.
The rules are simple to understand and it's a it's a doddle
to use."
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What Personal Computer |
"Using
StyleWriter is a real
eye-opener. It gives instant analysis and ratings for style,
sentence length and passive verbs. My style was consistently
rated poor until I started to follow the program's advice. Now
my writing is consistently good and occasionally the program
rates it as excellent."
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Accountant |
"As
I edit, StyleWriter's analysis and ratings of my document change.
There's no better encouragement to edit your draft than seeing
the improvement in your own scores. I now constantly strive
for three excellent ratings."
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University Lecturer |
"I
ran StyleWriter through my technical report. The redraft was
30 percent shorter, simpler and easier to read and understand.
I'll use StyleWriter on every document now."
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Technical Author |
"StyleWriter
really helped me during my Masters degree with an 81 percent
average. I am sure part of that is due to StyleWriter making
my writing more readable and succinct."
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Student |
"StyleWriter's
the best thing since sliced sandwiches!"
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Journalist
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"I
work as a senior marketing manager at a Fortune 500 company.
StyleWriter showed us we're not very good - no we're dreadful
- at communicating with our customers. Since using StyleWriter,
I've gained the skill of writing clearly. It's like shining
a searchlight through a sea of corporate fog."
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Marketing Executive |
"For
me the best feature is adding to the program. I have dozens
of preferred spellings, alternatives to industry jargon and
words I want to avoid. Adding my advice to the program means
I can check for all my editing issues in seconds."
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Newsletter Editor |
"You
could, for example, add technical words or words used in your
profession. I could imagine the editor of a computer magazine
adding the word 'baud' to remind writers it is often misused
for 'bits per second.'"
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Freelance Journalist |
"Every
lawyer should use this software. I should know - I've been practising
law for 30 years."
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Lawyer |
"In
an ideal world, every technical writer would have a copy of
StyleWriter."
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The Manual |
"StyleWriter
constantly surprises me. Just when I think I've produced the
clearest possible draft, it comes along and points out a few
more ways to improve my style or picks out a hyphenation or
word choice error."
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Subeditor |
"There's
more good advice in StyleWriter's help screens than on any $200
business writing course. The screens summarize the key points
of the best writing techniques and give me the confidence to
tackle any writing task."
- Training Officer |
"Once
I followed StyleWriter's advice and switched passive verbs into
active verbs, my writing became shorter, clearer and less ambiguous.
StyleWriter's advice on passive verbs alone is worth the price
of the program."
- Government Administrator |
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"I'm
from the Wall Street Journal and I need a copy of StyleWriter."
"Do
you want to review the package?"
"No.
I need it for everything I write."
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Press Journalist
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